- Elevator Pitch
- Text Description
- My opportunity is to eliminate dust accumulation on ceiling fan blades by creating covers out of spandex or nylon with a velcro enclosure. I will design them in different colors and designs to create a fashion sense for the home and remove the element of the boring standard fan blades.
- Name
- Covades
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Really good job. Looked professional, sold it well. I like that you included the obvious benefit of the dust prevention, as well as selling it on another front (fashion statement). Turning 50k into 2 billion dollars is a bold promise, but definitely caught my attention. If this pitch was being delivered to me I would to look into it further. Seems like you have a firm grasp on what your product is/ what you want it to be.
ReplyDeleteBeau,
DeleteThanks. It came across as 2 billion but I was saying 2 million.
Brian,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job explaining the product and getting your idea across. Just a suggestion for next time, I would try to record in a different room to help avoid the echo. It sounds like your camera has a powerful microphone which makes it difficult to record indoors (mine does the same thing), but sometimes recording in a smaller room can help with that. Overall you have a great product idea here and your pitch was very professional and well delivered. I liked that you included not only the practical use of dust prevention but also the personal use as a design statement. Great job!
Brian, i really enjoyed your presentation. Your talking pace was great and allowed me to keep up with what you were saying without getting bored. I would also reccommend going into a different room to avoid the echos, as it did hinder the understanding of what you were saying at some points. This is the first time seeing your idea and I think it is very unique! I was just staring at my dirty fan the ther day wishing I could clean it without getting the dust everywhere. You definitely have a customer to sell to, which is great!
ReplyDeleteBriana and Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback. I think we have to do another elevator pitch so I will definitely use another room to make it more presentable.
Brian,
ReplyDeleteI really appreciated that you took the time to dress professionally and come up with some real figures, as would be necessary in a true elevator pitch to investors. I've commented on your previous posts with enthusiasm that I'll repeat again - I think you've got a great idea with these "Covades"! I would suggest using the name of your product in the pitch to make it feel more like a concrete product.
Sarah,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advice. The next pitch I will incorporate your feedback and other feedback I have received. The first pitch always has room for improvement and using the name would be a vast improvement. Thanks again for taking the time and providing great feedback to help me improve.