- Pitch #3
- Feedback Reflection
- I received mostly positive feedback of my previous pitch.
- Something that stood out was feedback I received about being more dynamic in the first 10 seconds.
- Also it was suggested to come up with a slogan.
- I did not think any feedback was wrong but I was surprised at the number of people who thought it was spot on.
- Changes
- I tried to be more dynamic and enthusiastic in the opening and throughout the pitch.
- I tried to come up with a slogan within my pitch - "become a fan of your fan blades."
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Brian,
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy watching your elevator pitches, well done! I actually voted your elevators pitches as my favorite this semester! I love the idea and you are one of the few people that actually did this assignment in our group, so thank you! You speak very clearly and speak with so much confidence, it is spot on! Good job and keep at it!
I think you did a very nice job quickly explaining what the problem that we have is and how you are going to solve it. It is certainly a pain and your product has endless licensing possibilities through sports franchises and other similar entities. I would like to see how your product would affect the sound quality in the room that it is in. If there is no flapping, I think your idea could be useful to us and extremely profitable for you!
ReplyDeleteHey Brian,
ReplyDeleteYour last elevator pitch was great, but this one is even better! You definitely succeeded in catching my attention earlier on in your pitch, you spoke clearly and confidently throughout it, and your increased enthusiasm made me want to hear more. I also love the slogan, it is catchy and it fits perfectly with your product. Great job!
While your last elevator pitch was really good, I think you included a lot of aspects to this pitch that improved it as a whole. Opening with a question drew me in, and the addition of a clever slogan was a nice touch. Also I noticed the fan blades in the shot of the camera, and I was looking for the covades on them (I'm guessing they're still in development though).
ReplyDeleteAnother great pitch from you, and I love your professionalism. I love your enthusiasm and determination, which is obvious in your pitch. You take the time to dress the part and confidently present your idea. I love it!
ReplyDeleteAnother great pitch from you, and I love your professionalism. I love your enthusiasm and determination, which is obvious in your pitch. You take the time to dress the part and confidently present your idea. I love it!
ReplyDeleteBrian,
ReplyDeleteGreat improvement from the last elevator pitch, and definitely from the first! Your first two pitches were pretty spot-on, and this third one is for sure the best yet. You were dynamic and passionate from the beginning until the end. The last thing you said is what stuck with me and what I remember the most - "Covades, remember the name". Although this was not your slogan, I actually think it was a fantastic way to end the pitch because you said it so pointedly that it stuck with me, and I although I may forget the pitch as time passes the name of your product will stick with me, which is so very important. Great job!
Brian,
ReplyDeleteThis pitch is great you can tell you spent time to really get it right this time. All the pitchers I have seen from you have been great but this one is definitely it. The one thing for me that is hard in my pitch is being confidente but you do it with so much ease! Keep up the good work!